Reviews and Feedback for 'Welcome to FairCoop' wiki page
A couple of general proposals about the wiki page https://git.fairkom.net/faircoop/MediaCommunication/wikis/welcome-to-faircoop
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I would change the word 'Welcome' in the title to 'Introduction' or 'Explore' because we are mostly addressing people that passing by and they either choose to enter or not.
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Using a plural person like 'We' or 'Our' when talking about FairCoop's ecosystem makes others feel that they are outside of that and need to become members somehow. While, I believe we have mentioned in the past that FairCoop is not about members, but a more open and decentralized space where people may join-in anytime and collaborate on a group/tool.
So, for example, I would change the sentence "...this document is a brief introduction to who we are, how we work, and how we organize ourselves..." to one like this: "...this document is a brief introduction to What FairCoop represents, How it works and How it is organised..."
- Got some more specific text alterations to propose as well, but not sure if we should all edit in the wiki directly or work it through in a pad?