Trust_Protocol_proposal_faircoop_responsabilities_en.md

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 **1. Introduction**
 
 
-The FairCoop family is growing; every day there are more synergies, more people join the ecosystem and more local nodes are being activated throughout the planet. We are many and diverse. We're all connected and we're all going to one, with common goals.
+The FairCoop family is growing; every day there are more synergies, more people join the ecosystem and more local nodes are being activated throughout the planet. We are many and diverse, but we are connected and, from our differences, we go to one, enriching the process and building it day by day.
 
-As we don't always have the opportunity to work face-to-face, meet somewhere on the planet, look us in the eye... it would be interesting to work on a proposal that includes information and references among activists, such as a transparent system of reputation and trust among us for:
-
-Preserve trust in the FairCoop project
-Not to expose the reputation of the colleagues working on the project
-Strengthen our networks of trust with other related projects / possible alliances
-Encourage the participation and inclusion of new activists
+As we do not always have the opportunity to meet somewhere on the planet or to work face-to-face with each other... it would be interesting to work on a proposal that encourages the sharing of information and references among activists, such as an internal protocol of trust and transparency between us for:
 
+- Preserve trust in the FairCoop project
+- Not to expose the reputation of the colleagues working on the project
+- Strengthen our networks of trust with other related projects / possible alliances
+- Encourage the participation and inclusion of new activists
 (...)
 
 
 **2. List of tasks defined as "responsibility" (or sensitive)**
 
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 *  Server administration
 *  Managing FairCoin wallets, passwords, passwords, shared signatures
 *  Permissions for major social networks: https://git.fairkom.net/faircoop/MediaCommunication/wikis/Faircoop-Social-Networks
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 **4. Procedure**
 
-All persons who are likely to take on (sensitive?) responsibilities in FairCoop should be proposed prior to the General Assembly, either by themselves or by third parties.
+All persons who are likely to take on responsibility (sensitive?) tasks in FairCoop should be proposed beforehand at the respective area assemblies, either by themselves or by third parties.
 
-If there is a candidacy* to take on a "responsibility" task, a collective appraisal process would be initiated (after the GA) where the person in question would have to be endorsed/backed by at least 3 people of trust who know and attest to their suitability/goodness according to the profiles developed in point 3 of this proposal.
+If there is a candidacy* to take on a "responsibility" task, a collective appraisal process would be initiated (after the GA) where the person in question would have to be supported/guaranteed by at least 3 trustworthy people who know and attest to his/her suitability/goodness according to the profiles developed in point 3 of this proposal (may or may not be from his/her area).
 
 It would be the responsibility of the General Assembly to decide with the candidate:
-
     who
     assumes what
     for how long